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Nice job of controlling the depth of field to blur the background which seems to help bring out the eyes as the focal point. This piece...

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Slipping into the limitless boundaries of sleep
I find myself awake
Floating above the lake
Mirrored reflection reveals shadowy wings
Strange sensations take hold
As the mind starts to wander

Sinking down into the muck
My legs feel like water when I try to move
The colors of my vision seem blurred
As if I'm looking through new eyes
But can only focus on hues
Stop moving you're shaking the bed!

Where am I and how did I come to be here?
This looks like my room
Ashen coloration of the walls melts into the painting
Confusion sets in as layer upon layer of conscience slowly adds weight
Until fear of not moving petrifies the mind
Oh shit startled by knock at the door

One question seems to permeate my being
Is this what its like to be dead?
The silence is stifling
My surroundings surreal
Who's that on the table?
Or is dinner served?

I'm immersed in water
Someone please tell me why I'm still breathing?
Your not!
Shadows moving all around but no ghost
Its ok your fine we hear you
What do you mean you can hear me?

Moving like ethereal mercury
Becoming a phantom
I awake with a start
And know that I am still dreaming
My eyes focus on a tombstone
They read the letters RIP.

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n4t4 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks for the fav :)
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n4t4 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks for the fav :)
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B-Skipper Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the favorite! :D
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TVD-Photography Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thank you for the fave on Hiding Cheetah :hug: ^-^
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deskridge Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014   Digital Artist
Thanks for the :+fav:!
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inkvine Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks for the fave:)
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Dwarf4r Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
Thank you for the fav much appreciated.=P (Razz) 
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DugStanat Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the fav! :) I appreciate your support!
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BelovedUnderwing Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Professional General Artist
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thanks for the :+fav:!
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missfortune11 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the watch!! :) Nice gallery!
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